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Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Jimmy's horrible day!


lion1.pngJimmy inspected himself in the puddle that lay upon the jungle ground .He saw a loose strand of hair.’Oh No the ladies will dread seeing me’ he declared .He quickly tucked it in.As he rubbed his hand across his elegant hair he felt a substantial rain drop land on his attractive hair.’Oh No ,my hair ,my hair its dreadful the ladies will hate it ‘he screeched .But Jimmy did not know the rain drop was just the commencement of his unpleasant luck.Because there was a bat nearby who was about to dismount in the centre of his fro! Blop! The bat landed in his fro!’No ,No this can’t happen,noooo’! he dreaded ‘.As he was sitting under the tree yelling at himself a drop of shimmering coconut oil landed in his fro and detangled his hair letting the bat soar free!Jimmy was soooooooooo elated! He celebrated all night!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHAT: Miss Harris show us a picture of a lion and we had to make up the worst thing that could happen to Jimmy

SO WHAT:I learnt how to use good words in my stories

NOW WHAT:what do you think your next learning step is? to make such spelling is correct!!!!!!




Narrative writing

In the last couple of weeks room 12 has been doing narrative writing.  Miss H found a picture of a lion with a wig.Then we had to make up the most terrible thing that could happen to Jimmy the lion. It has to have a start, problem, resolution and moral message.
By Alicia. 

Thursday, 4 September 2014

The Monorail

Zoom,Zoom It Felt like i was going to come clattering off when I went crashing speedily round the second corner .
I was just about screaming the whole way! The Monorail must be one of the main attractions at the camp!
When It was my turn I leaped In the cart and went zooming off in a flash !
we were at living springs camp .We were staying 3 days and two nights at the outstanding camp!
But the most outstanding thing about the camp was the monorail.The worst thing about the monorail was when you has to drag the cart back up the hill for the next person !It was exhausting !!!It felt if you were transporting an Elephant with wheels !you could see the person at the top complaining for me to bring the cart back up the hill more quickly and the grubby and arid grass.The Monorail would have to be one of my favorite activities at the camp.Cause It was very fast as fast as a rocket and it was just plain awesome!
By Alicia